Monday, November 17, 2014

Case Study: Interesting but in need of revision


            My name is XVZ, and I am Writing and Literature major at LaGuardia Community College. As a student in Dr. Justin Rogers-Cooper’s Seminar in Teaching Writing class, I have been introduced to numerous writing techniques and teaching styles. As a private tutor, I felt I had enough knowledge to help students achieve academic greatness and while honor roll status and certificates were received, being in this class has taught me that education should be about more than just a grade. Contrary to popular belief, a number or a letter does not determine individual intelligence. My personal philosophy on pedagogy is all over the place. The best way I can answer this is to go all the way to the beginning of the semester, to the first day of class. When I walked in, everyone was busy writing about what in their opinion is the definition of “good teaching”. Zilelian and Ross were the names that immediately came to mind. Now, while I could go on about how they were amazing in their own way, I will say what they had in common: they were patient and believed in their students. They played a big role in what I believe good teaching is. Patience is definitely a key factor in good teaching; it may even surpass other contributing factors in significance. However, the idea of patience goes further than tolerating a great deal of stress and frustration from students. It also transitions into being tolerant with oneself and knowing that the obstacles are worth enduring because the outcome will be much greater. Being a patient educator means that you understand that not all students learn or grow at the same pace and that some need more encouragement than others.        
             Throughout the semester, I was able to observe tutoring sessions at the Writing Center and was privileged enough to work one-on-one with freshman students. What I learned was that all of the tutors, myself included, had one common goal and that was to help the student. Tutoring is more than just reinforcing what a teacher or professor has taught you, it’s about learning how to apply acquired knowledge to assignments and to your personal life. Tutoring should be more than helping students understand material; it’s about helping them in their entirety. This is a little idea that Moffett advocated: growth through thought development. His “…progression drama-narrative-generalization-argumentation describes not only long-range growth toward an enlarging repertory but describes also the daily abstracting we do as we convert new experience to working knowledge” (13). Each of these stages is necessary because students see the event taking place (drama), they memorize key components and share that with others (narrative), they analyze the situation (exposition), and take a stand and defend a side (argumentation). Tutors should encourage their students to think freely and to not be afraid to voice their opinions and thoughts. The idea of exercising free thought is so important because it helps develop different critical patterns in thought and it allows a person to interpret that information accordingly. Free thought allows a student to see different perspectives, something that is necessary for healthy growth, something that Moffett puts an emphasis on with the drama-narrative-generalization-argumentation model.
            During my observations at the Writing Center, one technique that was constantly practiced was Collaborative Tutoring. Donald A. McAndrew and Thomas J. Reigstad describe this technique to be the most effective during most tutorials due to the flexibility of the tutor—“the tutor encourages the writer, often with open-ended and probe-and-prompt questions, to engage in off-the-paper, exploratory talk and to expand upon underdeveloped themes in the paper” (26). All of the sessions I observed dedicated a great deal of time to talking and with good reason too.  Conversation and free talking are two strategies that were constantly being used during the Writing Center tutorials and during my own peer-to-peer sessions. Many people overlook the simplicity of talking when it comes to the academic world. This is horrible because it’s eliminating a basic form of communication in which a lot of important material and/or information can be released and used in assignments. It restricts students and denies them the fulfillment of socializing while learning. However, this was not the case at the Writing Center. Conversation overflowed the booths in which the tutorials took place; there was curiosity and excitement coming out of their mouths. It was a wonderful thing to observe and be a part of.
            At one point I was able to work with two students from Professor Hendrickson’s English 101 class at two different times during the semester. One student was quiet and seemed to lack interest in both the tutorial and her assignment. After reading her essay, I decided to ask her questions to further enhance her argument. Indifference shone through whenever I asked her a question regarding her topic. She repeated a variation of the same answer to every question I proposed. When asking questions didn’t go well, I decided to assign a focused free writing, McAndrew and Reigstad see this particular exercise as beneficial because it “…[focuses] on a portion of the draft that needs development…” (46). However, she did not take to the exercise. Ultimately, what I ended up doing was taking notes on things she had repeated with more emphasis throughout the session and gave that to her so she could work from it.  The second student was the complete opposite of the first. As I read over the material he had with him I could tell it was of interest to him. I presented him with a bunch of questions that he could answer throughout his paper to further solidify his argument because all he had was a basic outline of what he wanted his essay to look like. We spent about half hour brainstorming and playing off of our ideas as they came into recognition (48)— McAndrew and Reigstad categorized this notion as “playing your thoughts”, and while no stage or role play was necessary for this technique, the student was satisfied with the amount of work that was achieved. I thoroughly enjoyed tutoring him because I liked the amount of energy he had when it came to discussing his main idea. His enthusiasm made it that much more enjoyable.
            During the final peer tutoring session with Professor Alexander’s class, I was fortunate enough to work with a student that was as equally animated about his topic as the second student in Professor Hendrickson’s class. This student was entirely receptive and willing to take whatever feedback I gave him into consideration. While asking him about what some of his concerns in writing are, he confided in me that he had habit of writing what others wanted to read even if he didn’t personally agree with what he was arguing. Another concern for him was making his writing personal. He had attended law school in Brazil and was taught a certain way of writing, it was impersonal and formal. This reminded me of something Regina Foehr said in her tribute to James Moffett, “in academia, we too often take ourselves too seriously…[and we] fear reprisal if we explore the unconventional or write what we really believe” (6). Students are often scared of voyaging into controversial topics or representing them in writing due to the criticism they will receive. While there is safety in tradition, there is innovation in being able to discuss and appropriately correspond to issues that might be considered taboo. The notion of being able to think outside the box is something Moffett advocated. My response to him was to make writing, when necessary, as personal as possible. I encouraged him discuss his ideas freely and to always have enough evidence to prove his point.

There’s this stigma that surrounds tutoring. It says that if a student needs to be tutored it’s because they’re not meeting standard requirements and if they’re not meeting those requirements it’s because they’re not smart enough to. It took me years to realize that this is not true. I first saw this a few years ago when I first began tutoring children. I just couldn’t wrap my mind around the fact that these same children who had a deep understanding of their surroundings were encouraged to seek tutoring. For a long time I didn’t what I was doing with them that their overall performance in school had increased but the children were happy, as were the parents, therefore, I was happy. It wasn’t until around the holiday season that I finally understood what it was that set me aside from their teachers. One of my tutees had written me a lovely message inside of a Christmas card, in a nutshell; she thanked me for being patient with her and for always believing in her. If I had to narrow my philosophy on pedagogy down, it would be that: be patient and believe in your students. There are obviously a lot of other important factors that contribute to effective teaching, but on a more personal level, I believe patience and having confidence in your students is necessary. I want to make a difference in someone’s life just as Ms. Zilelian and Mr. Ross have made in mine. I want to be the reason why someone did not give up. 

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